Tuesday, May 26, 2009

My "Urban" reflection paper

As I was browsing through my old files, I came across this reflection paper I made during our Community Medicine rotation in Clerkship. I decided to post it for posterity because I liked the way this essay turned out, especially since it was made amidst the hustle and bustle of the "clerk year". I remember that we were required to write this during the "Urban" part of the Sapang rotation, when we were made to read a short story and had to answer certain points for reflection.

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    "The Story of Rosary" is a story that one too many Filipino families can relate to. For those who belong to the lower brackets of society, the trials and difficulties that the couple Jaime and Lucy face is the reality of everyday life – poor environmental sanitation, poverty, malnutrition, lack of education, inadequate wages, and lack of government funds.

    The beginning of the story narrates the living conditions of the family. Unlike a middle class family who get to live in a safe neighborhood, poor families hardly have a choice – either they sleep along the streets, or settle for a cramped and crowded relocation area. The implications of such a set-up are numerous, especially for the children and the elderly. Living in close proximity to one another means faster spread of illnesses and infections. Poor sanitation and inadequate facilities promote transmissible water-borne, food-borne, vector-borne diseases. In addition, environmental hazards pose an increased risk of preventable accidents and deaths. Living in such conditions further increases the burden of expenses that the family has to shoulder when untoward incidents such as illnesses, trauma, and death occur.

    The narration continues on to describe how Jaime and his wife Lucy ended up in barrio Tanyong. As like most of the Filipinos in rural areas, the search for a better life begins by moving to the city. The lure of more job opportunities appeals to those who have not been able to sustain profitable work in the provinces. Most families come to the city with hardly an idea of what to do, and most of them did not finish schooling. It becomes a risk, a gamble, to move out of their comfort zone, into an area where urbanization calls for more white-collar employees. Thus, those who can only do manual labor are left with menial jobs, under compensated, earning barely enough for the many children they have brought with them. And even so, because their education is sub-standard, the family continues to grow, with little consideration for family planning. The more children they have, the more they think that their children will eventually be able to rise their family out of poverty.

    It is not surprising then that Filipinos in the lower income bracket tend to look to persons of authority as persons who are infallible, including doctors, politicians, lawmakers. We, as physicians, thus have the responsibility to properly educate our patients, and not to mislead them for our personal gain. Comprehensive and proper health care begins with proper patient education. Proper maternal counseling on nutrition and breastfeeding, as well as vaccination and its possible side reactions, for instance, could help the family save on unnecessary medical expenses, and aid in prevention of future illnesses that could have been avoided.  

    Comprehensive health care entails not only treatment or management, but also prevention. If one of these components is lacking, then we have short-changed our patient. It has been said to us time and again, that we must first do no harm; the patient and his or her welfare should always be of paramount importance. We are always called to guide our patients to decide rationally, and if they are unable to do so, to educate and enlighten them so that they can make the right decisions. This includes understanding the current situation and condition of the patient – personal, social, economic, educational, and spiritual. Thus, for example, in prescribing medication, we should assess if the patient can fund the treatment, for if not, we must alter the regimen into one that is more affordable with comparable efficacy. We prescribe generic drugs so that the patient always has a choice.

    In the end, "The Story of Rosary" cries out the reality that is poverty. Its impact on our society is profound, and may spell the difference between life and death. We have seen how death can be prevented if proper action is taken. Although there is no simple solution to eradicate it, we can do our part in the fight against poverty. We can begin right when the patient-doctor relationship is formed. We are not called to be saviors, but are called to lead those who need to be guided.

BrainiaxMD '07

4 comments:

  1. Reading back on it now.. I see that I used way too many commas.. :P

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  2. hi, this is wonderfully written and explained! i felt it and i cant help but feel sad about the current state of our country, even after all these years. I hope to become a doctor who makes a change. :)

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    1. Thanks for the comment! :) It's nice to see that the stuff I wrote years ago can have an impact on others (even if it was just required paperwork for me at the time. hehe). Good luck on your studies!

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  3. Just realized that my public posting of this has made it susceptible to plagiarism by medical students too lazy to create their own narrative. Adjustments have been made in this regard. Don't plagiarize guys. If you do have to do that, I directly question your integrity as future doctors, and would go so far as to say that you are not worthy to wear the mantle of our honorable profession.

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